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  • First song with new band...

    Hey dudes, I just started a death metal band with my buddy Matt Connell who drums for Exhumed and after 2 jam sessions we wrote this really rushed half assed song, but it's kinda cool when you consider that! Haha the new stuff will be much more intricate and thought out I promise but I figure this was a pretty good start!

    Here's the original version we tracked in the jam room, it was the first time we ever played it all the way through and later our new bassist/vocalist tracked some vocals on it, he did it in 2 halfs and you can tell because it was more gutteral in the first section and we wanted a more more punchy and articulate and that kind of shines through in the rest! I've included the lyrics at the bottom of the thread as well!

    http://www.cjmmachinery.com/deathasyourthrone.mp3

    Here's a version with retracked guitars, no vox added yet but just a clearer tone to hear the riffs much better...

    http://www.cjmmachinery.com/newmix.mp3

    The song isn't really finalized or complete yet but I wanted to share it with you guys anyways! Let me know what you think!

    Lyrics...

    Death as your throne




    Stare in the face of demonic disorder
    Grasp your faith - an abolished life.
    Can’t you see the darkest illusion?
    Heresy of ignorant strife

    Give in to eternal psychosis
    A better way is utterly hopeless
    I’ve drank from the heart of your carcass
    I’ve envision the end of the world

    They have laid siege to thee
    Only the suffering
    keeps my mind free from death
    You’re life’s breath is hopeless

    Hopeless

    Scorned - I saw you fall
    9 days from heaven, and you’ll never crawl
    Only the son of - the morning star
    (Can) focus reality – ending it all


    Lost from birth below a fatal prophet
    Doomed to serve a fatal birthright
    Cast beneath five pillars of hatred
    You’ve only one lord to command

    Cut the throats of non believers
    Beneath your veil of insanity

    Crawl into the pit of emptiness
    Embrace your self amongst the bones

    The walls are covered with blood of your own
    Nothing is sacred when you die alone
    Black seas corrupt you, a cancer within
    A mountain of hatred, take death as your throne

    Death as your throne

    Stare in the face of demonic dis-order
    Grasp your faith an abolished life
    Cant you see the darkest illusion
    Heresy of ignorant strife

    Give in to eternal psychosis
    A better way is utterly hopeless
    I’ve drank from the heart of your carcass
    I’ve envision the end of the world

    Cut the throats of non believers
    Beneath your veil of insanity

    Crawl into the pit of emptiness
    Embrace your self amongst the bones

    The walls are covered with blood of your own
    Nothing is sacred when you die alone
    Black seas corrupt you, a cancer within
    A mountain of hatred, take death as your throne

    Death as your throne

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    Re: First song with new band...

    Wow! That's heavy shit! That vacuum cleaner sound at :40 is sorta weird. Just kidding! I know it's your singer.

    Not quite my taste in vocal stylings, tbh.

    By the way, it's "halves", not "halfs". LOL! [img]/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]

    ~ Annah

    "To the halves and the half knots." ~ Shakespeare (not really)

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