New shredder on the block!!!

[martyfavento]

Hi everybody! My name is Marty Favento..I'm a 23 year old guitar player. I'm working on my debut solo album right now. Here's some stuff you might like
Demo for one song for my solo album:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tIftDA-oPUw
Live song »New Mind Construction«:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uUo6pSx5Pl4
Guitar solo live:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Uf6-9y4OMSU
Hit me on facebook:
https://www.facebook.com/pages/Marty...79034215521414

[daisp]

Sounds great...welcome aboard!

[KevinDguitar]

Welcome!

[jgcable]

Marty... thanks for sharing and you didn't ask for a critique but.... Just keep one thing in mind... NOTE SELECTION. You have nice precise technique but your runs have a lot of "wrong" notes in them. Another thing to keep in mind.... for instance.. the intro to your demo song for your solo album is entirely too long. Repeating that 2 note whammy bar warble for that long would cause an A & R person to hit the stop button immediately. Its just not that interesting to the listener. I would cut that in half and get to the song. You definitely have Steve Vai and Satch influences. Again.. thanks for sharing and WELCOME! (btw... I am the resident critic on the JCF!!) I mean you no harm!

[straycat]

Welcome Marty glad to have you here.
I have to agree with jg a little on the warble thing. A little is fine but the demo was a bit much.Just my opinion and its YOUR music so do what you want.
Shredding is fine but dragging a lead out too far kind of kills the song in a way.Again my opinion from a listeners standpoint.